Writing T2 week 8

Hello and welcome back to my blog today, as you may already know I forgot to post my blogs from week 7 - 11 so im going to be showing you guys my writing task from week 8 term 2!! Down below is what I wrote for writing. It was narrative writing so I hope you enjoy reading my story.

"Up above the mountains and valleys, every stork has a special job to deliver and bring happiness into people's lives. But every stork has a different cloud maker like some are crazy, some are funny and some are angry. But this particular cloud maker in the sky is a very specific one, his name is Gus and he is kind and caring too. But he has trouble creating soft and heartfelt  animals, Gus has a stork named Peck and Peck has to deliver animals Gus makes. But Gus creates Vicious and harmful animals like a porcupine and a baby croc, one day Peck exhaustedly flies to Gus. As Gus turns around he looks sad so then peck reaches out for the creation Gus had made and as soon as Peck holds the animal it turns into a porcupine! Peck’s eyes go wide and he screams, he throws up the porcupine catches it but has to catch it not realising he would get spiked. He screams even more and throws it to each of his wings Gus takes the porcupine out of Peck’s wings. Gus packs the porcupine and gives the bag to Peck. As Peck flies back to Gus he arrives to him with spikes all over his head."

That was my writing I hope you enjoyed it!!